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Re: What ill, what hope, what?
I find this cool. It made my day after a long day at school. This explains the pain in a sole that has been lost and no one seems to ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Sun and Sky
I’m perplexed is this happy or sad??? When it started out it sounded as if you where upset that the sun came up, but then you made it sound as ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: An endless dream
I know this is old, but I really want you to put more in the back story. it would make a grate chapter two if you would excplain what broght ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: I am free
Your poem is cute but where is the image instead of trying to make it rhyme so much try and let us see and feel your emotions but it was ...
Mar 24, 2011
