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Re: Indulgence
don't worry I get what you mean haha
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: You can't -- I can and I will
I'll be happy that you'd use this as your signature! I am beyond happy that my poem created this much impact! Also, my condolences to your brother, hope you're okay ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
Oh, then I think you should expound more on the trauma? It's a bit out of nowhere.
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Indulgence
Thank you so much! It's nice to see that my poem created an impact:))
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Indulgence
Thank you for the review! It is much appreciated. Oh, um regarding the alliteration and assonance can you give me a line from my poem that doesn't seem to make ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Silenced
Thank you for the feedback! I'll be sure to address your suggestions when I edit. I didn't realize it was weird haha I was trying to incorporate the way a ...
Apr 3, 2020 -
Re: Silenced
Even though I'm a Christian (protestant), what the Catholic did during the medieval period was so gruesome. Oh my goodness, I'm glad that one of my poems inspired you:) It's ...
Apr 2, 2020 -
Re: You can't -- I can and I will
Thank you for the feedback! I'll be sure to remember your constructive criticism on my poem :)
Apr 1, 2020