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Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Really? I don't think it sounds too forced, but I might come up with something different. Anyone else have ideas on this? That aside, thank you so much for your ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Ok thanks!
Apr 17, 2016 -
Re: Light and darkness
Yes I agree with mkphoenix
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Oh my gosh yes that is exactly what this is about "-Let's talk a bit about losing someone you never had!" part is exactly how I'd felt. And thank you ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Thank you so much!
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
Thank you for this helpful critique! I'm glad you like the title ^^ I'll be sure to update it with the grammatical corrections (is that something I can do?)
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: For Pepe
Lolololol wow
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: When I was young...
how do i delete comments? I accidentally posted the review twice but I don't know how to delete so I just changed it to this instead
Apr 15, 2016 - Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy - Apr 15, 2016
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Re: You Can't Lose Someone You Never Had - Elegy -
BTW this is my very first "real " poem so please criticize appropriately thank you!
Apr 15, 2016