kathydacat

Wow! I really liked this! There's not much I can say as how to improve it, but it's also good to know what you've done well. I liked the repetition ...

I liked the way this piece was almost poetry, and the way it flowed was rather beautiful. The grammar sounds fine, and the imagery is very well done. The only ...

I liked the repetition of 'For those lost souls', but ti doesn't quite work in the first part of the last stanza, but I have no idea how re-do it, ...