katchaerin

WOW! cute poem! ooo. So that's the tanka. If you say it's addictive, I might as well try that too. XD GOOD JOB! -KAT

Hey Rach! Wow. This short story is cool. The MC's voice is unique. I mean, it hooks us up. It hooked me up, even though I don't like super natural ...

OH! By the way, I'm really sorry I couldn't suggest a name for your novel. I'm not really good in titles, and I still don't know how this story goes. ...

Phew! I got scared, I admit. This is a great piece of work. It's direct. Write more, okay?

Wonderful work, Silentpages! That first line made me want to read the whole story so badly. It's immediate. I just simply love your stories. It's not too common. XD Keep ...

Hey there! Wow. Good job on writing a story with only 103 words. Must be hard. XD I wonder where the conflict is, though. The girl seeing wax drip on ...

Well, the others have already stated some of the comments I'd like to say, so I guess I'd just have to say : WONDERFUL and CUTE work! Keep it up. ...

Thanks, jungle! XD I need your comments. I already edited some parts, by the way. p.s. I'm glad you liked it. I'm posting some more (the next chapters).