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Ah, good point. Its purpose was essentially to illustrate the idea that even those we'd not expect to have their vulnerabilities have 'em. Just a little detailed anecdote from an ...

Vielen Dank!! I used to frequent this site for awhile, kinda forgot about it and found my way back. I've thought on making it into something longer, but I'm actually ...

I like this! A lot. Hm... I've nothing else to say, here.

Once again: Your poetry = brilliance. Nothing to critique, sorry.

Well, I liked the rhyme scheme. And the usage of the metaphorical (metaphorical? I'm assuming) vocabulary was effective. I enjoyed how it conveyed a lot of emotion in a short, ...

I liked it. The imagery it evoked was pleasant.