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Re: Camping horror
I really like the monsters you introduce, and I love how the toilet badger seems to come out of nowhere after a seemingly normal intro! I also like how you ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Dystopia with no title (If you have ideas give me a shout in the comments)
Firstly, why would the staff willingly have themselves arrested? It doesn't make sense to me. Especially in a dystopian environment where everyone else is out to save their own asses. ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: Lost in the Code
I like the story, It is very interesting and full of excitement. I wonder If you could have had a more detailed ending and said why it was the worst ...
Feb 27, 2015
