justine94

This was deep. I really appreciated that aspect--good job. I don't know them if at all then not at all Perhaps some punctuation would make this clearer. And experienced with ...

This was an interesting piece, but a bit confusing. Perhaps a bit more explanation either in the beginning or right after the beginning would be helpful for understanding the story ...

Wow. That was the first thought that came to mind. This is fantastic. Bravo. As mentioned previously, you did a wonderful job of boldly poking--no, stabbing--fun at the characters. The ...

Wow, first of all, way to be open and honest! As a freshman who is beginning her second semester of college, I can totally relate. It's crazy that people think ...

I can relate to this. I am a Writing major at main goal is to add a depth to my work that has not appeared in my writing before. I ...

SO true! I love your transparency here...and I totally agree about forgiving from your heart rather than from your mouth. Great job. :)

I love Star Wars (as my avatar suggests), and I think this a is a great fan fiction! It is solid (besides lacking much of a climax) and I enjoyed ...

Well done once again! I found myself being irritated with Marvel until I realized what he was doing. The twist about the mentor--great! Looking forward to the next chapter! My ...

Woo! That made me laugh! Well-written...good vocabulary. I liked the part about the Joker. :)

Very interesting way to continue the story! I liked the description of the dress, and found myself cringing at the thought of her trying to put it on. I would ...

Excellent writing! Your descriptions and word choice are fantastic. As a person who loves to use bigger words just because I know their definitions, I can appreciate it. The suspense ...

Very well-written! I think that it would be good if you made sure to capitalize all of the names. I was able to follow the story easily and enjoy it, ...