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"Every man's his own friend, my dear." -Fagin, Oliver Twist

  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: umbilical

    i cannot comprehend this poem and your writing is...indescribably beautiful. this is literally one of the best poems i've ever read. incredible.

    Sep 6, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: fading away like the rest of them

    quick comment: this first stanza- i remember the first time i cried into another person's skin. it felt a lot like shame, probably. there's something so embarrassing about vulnerability; she ...

    Aug 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: Almost June: Chapter 2

    thanks so much for the review!

    Aug 24, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Almost June: Chapter 1

    thanks so much for the review!! would you like to be tagged when i post future chapters?

    Aug 21, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Almost June: Chapter 1

    thank you so much!! i will definitely tag you :D

    Aug 20, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Almost June: Chapter 1

    also, june is pretty young- she's twelve years old!

    Aug 18, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Literature Re: Almost June: Chapter 1

    thank you so much for the review! that was super helpful and when i read it in my head with the changes you suggested it sounded much better. have a ...

    Aug 18, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Mirror, Mirror

    Of course! You already are a writer haha, I'm so glad you're on this site.

    Jul 10, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: the art of getting lost

    thank you so much for the wonderful review! great feedback, i'll definitely go and fix those :D

    Jan 28, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Fantasy Re: Mirror, Mirror

    your poetry is so beautiful and heartfelt, Ailah, I love this so much! you are an incredible writer and I love reading your poems. I don't know how you manage ...

    Jan 27, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: the art of getting lost

    thanks so much for the review!!!

    Jan 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: the art of getting lost

    thanks for pointing out the thing with the i's! I typed this on my phone and it autocorrected them haha, I'll go and fix those. Thanks so much for the ...

    Jan 26, 2024
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: What I Want You To Understand About My Eating Disorder

    Dec 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: New Novel: Chapter 4

    yayayayay! yeah i'm going to make that a theme in this book...eXcItInGgGg

    Dec 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: New Novel: Chapter 4

    Thanks so much for the review!!!

    Dec 17, 2023


Stupidity's the deliberate cultivation of ignorance.
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