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Re: Home Isn't With Him
I like the poem overall! Very heartfelt! A few sections sounded a little awkward or choppy to me: "And I’m wondering if he’s true." This perhaps could be rewritten as ...
May 12, 2016
I like the poem overall! Very heartfelt! A few sections sounded a little awkward or choppy to me: "And I’m wondering if he’s true." This perhaps could be rewritten as ...
May 12, 2016