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Thanks, I will work on that.

Oh my goodness! What made you suspect it was a dream from the beginning? I meant it to be a surprise. Ha haa haa! Thanks.

oh, my goodness! Candy is a non stop talker! I can barely hear her friends' response. Your story is really funny, kept me smiling all the way. Its hilarious how ...

Hi. This is pure action movie story. It holds suspense from start to finish, only i didn't get to understand the last paragraph. This is a brilliant story, add more ...

Hello! I like how you fix the 'scampered' word all over your story. Its really creative! I wish you make more stories with repetitive words like this.

Hi. This is wonderful story. Your strong descriptions make feel like I am inside the story. I got worried like the bride and shocked by the gunshots. I wish you ...