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I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I don't really car for this poem myself. I don't know why I posted it. Please check out my short stoies though!!

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I loved it :pirate3:

I absolutely love concept. It is great. Make a few ajustments here and there. For example, some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, and the flow of the lines ...

I don't quite understand it. But I still liked the phrasing and the length

That was very awesome!! I loved it!! It is a lot better then my poems are turning out to be!!! Keep up the awesome writing!!! :D

I liked it as well, but I also agree with the other two comments.... Keep writing. It was good!

I loved it... I sang it... and I loved loved loved loved it!!!! Keep writing!!!!!