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hey, this was ok, but i felt it lacked originality. also there wasn't realy a rythm, so the words didn't flow as i read them. try reading it out loud ...

This was frikin good maaan! I usually get bored reading long poems, but this held my attention all the way through. I couldn't pick out any punctuation or spelling mistakes, ...

Hey! Nice poem. I liked the way it flowed. The rythm and rhyming went well to create a solid platform, from which the ideas were launched with precision. I think ...

Hey! Really good poem. Short and sweet: I like! I liked the flow and the rythm was very good, coupled with the rhyme it made for a sweet read. The ...

hey! awsum poem. I won't try and critique it as all the points have probably been covered above. There is a brilliant use of vocab, in that i can visualise ...

ha ha awsum Usually i get bored of reading scripts, but this one kept me entertained the whole way through. To be honest I think all the errors were picked ...

hey, i thought this poem was very good. It flowed nicely and had some good imagery. there may have been some minor mistakes, however they didn't detrract from the quality ...

hey, this is good. it's short, but the quality is high. the characters emotions are described well and as a reader i could relate to them. i like the way ...

hey, i liked this story, it ran smoothly and the discussion flowed. maybe you should give the characters a little more background, like say how they know each other, why ...

Midnight Horror Island August 15 1:39 a.m. Ring......ring.... Marissa Calhoun burst out of the nightmare by the sound of her cell phone ringing. Yawning, she reached over to her nightstand ...

To really understand what's going on... you should probably read the first coupla chapters. Although this is another stand-alone chapter. I'd really like to know about a couple things: 1. ...