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Re: Meet me by the starry seacove, and I'll show you how to die
Holy... This isn't a review, I'm just stopping by to say... wow. The second person POV is amazing here. The descriptions of the emptiness in the very beginning really made ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part IV)
Sorry, I entered it before I reviewed my own review! I missed these things: Last sentence of the first paragraph: "People had died, money had been spent and time had ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part I)
I'm happy to review this! The experience so far has been very enjoyable! If it's chronological, I'm wondering if you should have it as a regular part of the story? ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Part II)
Aah, yeah, the names were similar enough for me to mix them up. Ali and Lia... gosh, I totally missed that! It may just me of course, I do have ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)
Don't worry about having work to do. You have been very successful in keep suspense :) I'm glad to help, I'm really enjoying the story so far.
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: The Little Red Box
No problem
Dec 14, 2013 -
Re: Eye of the Slayer- Chapters 2-4
I really don't care about points. It cuts off at 100 anyway. If I just wanted points, it would be a lot less work for me to write a long-winded ...
Dec 10, 2013 -
Re: A Hitman
No problem! It may have just been outside your comfort zone, but I enjoyed nonetheless :)
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: The Biggest Lie Ever Told
Of course! Is this for school or something?
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
Oh, okay! I understand then. In that case, I would make it very clear it is a gun so there's no doubt in the audience's mind. Mention the bullets or ...
Dec 8, 2013 -
Re: An Introduction
No problem! I enjoyed reading it. Sorry about the brackets! I've tried a lot of things, but so far they've worked the best.
Dec 8, 2013