jls1638

thanks the next chapter will probably be out within the next week or so, I will reply on this chapter when the third one is out and it will be ...

I have chapter 2 it is the same title (except is labeled chapter 2 instead of chapter 1 go figure) anyways wanted to let everyone know who was looking forward ...

First of all thanks for reviewing and yes there will be a chapter 2, I have 4 chapters done as of right now but just need points to put them ...

Thanks for the wording hints. You said to add Sarah's description I presume you are meaning physical and I was wondering where in the writing you would suggest putting this?

Thanks I will try to go back and edit those and get the second chapter on, I have written up to four chapters but will be reviewing a few more ...

I like the plot. It is very interesting and I would like to see it developed. It is confusing and hard to follow for example, when she gets the scratches ...