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Re: Heartbroken
I really enjoyed this. You managed to present a scene that was easy to understand and feel. Just beautiful, I loved it. There are just a few things that I ...
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part Two
Yea, I think I have to agree with Dudette completely, my mind would be racing. Also, you might be able to add in why she chose Trevor over Sam. For ...
Jun 24, 2011 -
Re: Eyes of a Stranger- Part One
Yes, this was one of the few stories that I've actually read while being with this site and I have to say, I'm very impressed. Your flow and transitions from ...
Jun 24, 2011
