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All good about the relationship stuff. I understand what you're saying. Relationships can be so hard to effectively convey. I personally cannot write anything resembling a healthy relationship, so let

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Let me know when you are feeling better and I will. Today seems like a busy day as is, so I can wait if you need me to. jimss

Hey Wolfie, I think some more explanation is due. The city they are in, Bai Jian, has no laws or government. (Four crime syndicates hold the city together) As for ...

jimss here Hey! Thanks for the review! Just a word of warning, as I sit here shaking my head at my stupidity. I made substantial edits to my first chapter ...

Thank again for the review. Yea the violence thing can seem really out of place without context. It was one of the major things that I was concerned about when ...

Hey, storm! Thanks for the review! Grammar is, by far, my weakness when it comes to writing. The grammar notes I get are very useful for helping shore up that ...

Hey Rosey, I appreciate the grammar stuff. It's not really my strong suit. Cheers Jimss

Hey there. Thanks for the review! I hope you get the chance to read more! Cheers jimss

Jimss here Hey, Wizard. Thanks for the response! I always appreciate dissenting viewpoints. Echo chambers are a disservice to rational argument. Not to be rude, but the first paragraph stems ...

Jimss here Hey, Quill! About the present tenses, you are completely right. That is your style, and I probably should not have spent so much time on that. (I mean ...

Hey Quill Sorry about all the grammar errors. It's been a while since I have edited this section (trying to get the others done) SO, to answer some your questions, ...

Also, if you want to curse someone out or insult them, PM them. Don't make them respond to you on someone's work. It just makes both of us look bad.

I usually like keeping my profanity to a minimum, but since you started it... It was one personal opinion on a review that didn't concern you. I'm sorry my little ...

Haha, all good. I figured it might more sense the more I read. Please go ahead and ignore all those ambiguity comments then. Ignorance is the mother of all jackasses. ...