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Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty kisses
I like it. Its nice, simple, and everyone can relate to it. I especially like the lists that you have, they add a lot of emotion.
Apr 6, 2006
Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My tongueless goodbye
The title of the poem got my attention, and the imagery kept it. I loved the line about hearts cut on coke cans. It's beautiful, you are an amazing poet.
Apr 6, 2006

Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia