jessie2009

See I like twilight, but I LOVED this. I don't get why people are saying take some of the swearing out, if you didn't have the swearing then it wouldn't ...

Wow. I really like it. You didn't give to much detail. You spaced it out. I didn't find any mistakes while I was reading this, but I'm not the best ...

I agree with the others, Lucas seems older than eleven. And did April's mother died before? Because why would she move with her brother. Thats the only thing i don't ...

i really liked it! You had so many details, I knew the scenery. And I don't think you should change it! But if you want to change it and do ...

Oh my! I thought Luke was going to die! That was such a good story. Is there any more parts? I would love to read more. You are a excellent ...

Wow! I loved it! You had so many details that were perfect for it! I could picture it perfect. That was so sweet that Luke was going to rescue the ...

Abbi- I really liked it. This poem reminds me of my family. You write really good. I never noticed that you did before. But this time i actually read your ...