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Re: My Demons Won't Leave
Hello, Jelly here for a review. Writing a character's depression can be quite difficult but I think you handled it quite well. I only have a few nitpicks. I am ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Buried Alive
Hello, Jelly here to review. The concept is interesting but I think the presentation could be done a bit better. The best advice I could give is work on the ...
Nov 13, 2015 -
Re: Saving Grace (Unedited)
Hello, Jellybaby here. This is my first time giving a review so excuse me if I make any mistakes. I am not a person of faith but I find these ...
Sep 4, 2015