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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction
    Re: My Demons Won't Leave

    Hello, Jelly here for a review. Writing a character's depression can be quite difficult but I think you handled it quite well. I only have a few nitpicks. I am ...

    Nov 13, 2015

  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic
    Re: Buried Alive

    Hello, Jelly here to review. The concept is interesting but I think the presentation could be done a bit better. The best advice I could give is work on the ...

    Nov 13, 2015

  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual
    Re: Saving Grace (Unedited)

    Hello, Jellybaby here. This is my first time giving a review so excuse me if I make any mistakes. I am not a person of faith but I find these ...

    Sep 4, 2015


I always knew that deep down in every human heart, there is mercy and generosity. No one is born hating another person because of the color of his skin, or his background, or his religion. People must learn to hate, and if they can learn to hate, they can be taught to love, for love comes more naturally to the human heart than its opposite.
— Nelson Mandela, Long Walk to Freedom