jcloud14

This is really good, I could never think of it. I loved the part where you said "With parents outraged, and friends in a daze, the young couple disappeared into ...

Cool poem, very creative and original. Interesting subject that readers can relate to.

I liked it it was very creative, much better than any of my poems. I don't really agree with Galerius but I guess we all have are own oppinions. I ...

Good job. It made me so sad. Is this all in past tense are was it supposed to be like a story (present tense). It was getting a little confusing. ...

Good job it is very interesting. I do have to agree a little with moonglowe though on the next chapter you need to take your time, I mean it's not ...

You are very talented, good job.