jclifton

i love this story, or part of story... i know everyone's said this already but the way you create mood is EXCELLENT, and i especially feel the mood of this ...

this is a good poem, and i dont say that very often.... [i love good poems because they're so rare] i agree completely with charliebo's critique... like he said, you ...

this poem offers great insight on the symbolic existentialism that the endless bounty of the sea brings us writers.... a masterful piece, whose depth and simplicity juxtapose beautifully to create ...

as with poetry, i am a pretty harsh critic of fantasy, because neither type of writing really appeals to me, and both are usually pretty unoriginal (especially the latter). so ...

i must say, i didn't exactly love this poem. if you know me, you'd know i'm an extremely harsh critic of poetry, and it takes a really outstanding poem to ...

i think this is a decent poem, with a good sense of rhythm and imagery. there were several cliche's in the poem that can be overlooked but that you might ...