jcbutterrtoast

Yes I do believe in the Big Bang... though I'm open to other possibilities, of course :) And even I don't know where I pulled the three crones out of ...

Yeah, the fonts were a mistake, and I'm not quite sure how to change them. But I'm glad you approve of the story!

Thanks for the review!

Hmmm, the word "fae" was not a typo, and I believe it means something mystical, magical, fairy-like, etc. Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you can relate.

Interesting that you mentioned the gender mix-up, as I have had that same issue brought up once before. It was my intention to write the main character as a male, ...

I'm sorry you didn't follow-I'll do better next time for sure! And thanks for the honest review!

Unfortunately the blackness in not the nostril; it is, in fact, what's not outside the casket. Nothingness, basically. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the story!

Wow. What a very witty, straightforward review. I'd love to talk to you about writing sometime, and I think I'll take a peek at your work now. And if it's ...

Thank you!

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

Whoops, sorry.

Ha! Love the enthusiasm, and I hope you'll like my other pieces as much as this one!

Thank you for your very constructive feedback! And no, Pammy and the fancy girl were -not- the same person, though I hope that part didn't throw you too much. And ...

Thank you for your very constructive feedback! And no, Pammy and the fancy girl were -not- the same person, though I hope that part didn't throw you too much. And ...