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Re: Spotlight
@Snake7 I see your point about the ending, I'm working on a better way to conclude the story, but the whole point is that spotlight is just a game, and ...
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Re: The Edge of the Universe
Wow - this poem is simply amazing! Each and every word is perfect, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it (and I'm usually very picky). Great work :)
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Coward
What a beautiful poem. It's completely honest and true; the perfect words to describe a coward. Just remember, opinion only has one P. Happy writing :)
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Masquerade
Thanks Jelly, I'm glad you liked it :) I'm not quite sure if I'm going to continue this story, since I am working on another novel at the moment, but ...
Jul 8, 2011
