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jayflames1

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Hi. Have we met?

    "Hello. I don't think we've met before, " "I've met you before" CONFLICT HERE

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A story/essay

    thank you for the compliment AND review, i couldn't find the completed version of this essay (and im still looking for it).

    Jan 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 4

    the reason the main character seems like a girl is because of how they see "Drew". Not...hmm, No girls are named Drew, and the main character seems to be attracted ...

    Jan 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 1

    I'd say this is terrible( JK, this was awesome, reading this in language arts. SO worth it, I guess I'm not doing anything productive today, imma read these)

    Jan 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 1

    I'd say this is terrible( JK, this was awesome, reading this in language arts. SO worth it, I guess I'm not doing anything productive today, imma read these)

    Jan 26, 2015


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner