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Re: Someday
I'm Jayden and I really like this. It makes you think of the future and the roads we all take. I like how you say describe how you think the ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: The Ultimate Game Zone- Prologue
Hey Nick! It's me again. Anyway, I just read your story and wanted to say well done! It's not a bad start at all, I think that if you maybe ...
Dec 14, 2009 -
Re: That Awkward Moment
"You're not the only one who's nervous." This one quote alone makes me want to read more. It is such a cliff hanger that is so incredibly good that I ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Sunsets
All I really want to say is wow. I thought that you included beautiful details about how the sunset was a splash of colors and how the guy just held ...
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Flow
Way to go! This is so sweet and totally makes me think about different things the wind can mean. It really makes me think about interpretation, and it's so deep, ...
Dec 13, 2009
