janice

May I please point out that this sounds like a Good Charlotte song that I am not terribly fond of...? I agree with the above post, pink... it burns! :shock: ...

Petrified. Those lids refuse to close Perhaps, they will cease to open once more? One small thing, you contradict "refuse to close" with the phrase"cease to open". If possible, could ...

Just a few grammar/spelling corrections here :shock: The tinted blue window held his reflection on the oppisite side of the glass, opposed to the countless back stabbers on the other ...

This is just as good as the other one! I really enjoyed reading all the way through. Only suggestion is to develop more of a plot and have more going ...

Hi there. I really enjoyed reading this. It's quite the sort of thing that anyone can relate to at some point in their lives because we all have voices in ...

beautiful guitars and mesmeric music taught you the ninetyseventytwo style, and since you could only afford unlicensed radio time you refused to cut your hair and a lovechild was born ...

First of all, I think that the first verse rhymes a little too much. The rhyming pattern is: Wake up to a brand new day (a) But down here it ...