jamgalloway

Okie dokie, thank you! :)

Thank you! No one has told me yet that this chapter felt out of place, so I'm gonna have to do some studying on my chapters now to see how ...

You're welcome, I'm glad I'm actually of use, lol. And I'm gonna write the new review later on today, probably in a few hours when I'm home. Good luck on ...

Honestly, I write in first person myself, but there are benefits to writing in third person too. In third person you can have contrasting viewpoints in the same chapter, you ...

Well, the reason she needs the gun isn't exactly for the trip to the cabin, which is why that part's not mentioned. And yeah, I see how it's confusing cause ...

I agree with having the MC push more to make them stay, and she does do that more later. And yeah, I should definitely put a disclaimer on my story, ...

Thanks for the review. I'll do the 18 thing since my story will have a lot of violence and crap in later, and then there's the cussing as well, so ...

Thank you! I admit that my book starts off a bit cliched-like, but quickly down the road it changes from that. And I absolutely plan to write my main character's ...

Hey, thank you for the review, I very much appreciate it! :) The first thing you pointed out was on purpose, the word 'figure' was meant as the shape of ...

Thank you for reviewing it, I have a lot to go back and change and I'm gonna keep everything that you said in mind. Right now I seem to be ...

Anytime :)

Go for it, thanks

hahaha Yeah, I tried to review yours, so excuse the ugly. I feel like I'm pretty bad at writing reviews, lol.

No, I've been lazy about reviewing so I haven't had enough points to, lol. Once I review some stuff I'll post it. I'ma go check yours out now

Sorry, it took so long for me to reply, but thanks! I really appreciated the review, and I hope you'll read more of my story when I post it. (And ...