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Re: The colour purple
hi and here to review! ok so it was a good and meaningful poem dude but like everyone else the only flaw detected is your grammer and in the first ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Knife
hello my name is James! so dude i think i get the whole perspective of the poem and it's theme...'the knife' okay cool. i say their is no need for ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: This is the End
hello my name is James! and i am here to give you an A+ on you'r work. i think i really got lost in the theme of the poem, it ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: I am Unwritten
hello my name is James! sorry but it is hard to not follow such talented people! lol well i totally get the sadness of you'r poem. it is sad , ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Plato's Cave
hey Dem, glad to see you around well i enjoyed you'r work. you have natural expression and sense of rhymes i think the theme started of a little to serious ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Classy Witch (A Draco-Hermione love story/parody)
hello my name is James! hahhaah i do read harry potter and enjoy paradoies but you really made this one insane. you used the charecters brilliantly. i really enjoyed reading ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: deleted
hello my name is James! I adore nature poems basically because they are really soothing for my mind and you'rs really hit the spot. hahah. anyway i really like the ...
Jul 9, 2010 -
Re: Masquerade of Patriotism
hello my name is James and i'm new, nice to see such good work. i like the way the rhymes fit and have a very nice specific meaning. A discription ...
Jul 8, 2010
