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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: My Head Hurts

    I'm going to add more to the story and make one of his memories focusing on the relationship with him and the mother and see how it works. I originally ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: My Head Hurts

    Thanks for taking the time to read it! the italics are his therapy session while the regular text are events from his past. It's a little confusing, I'm going to ...

    Dec 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Late Night Text

    Why didn't she call the police? That really bothered me. Also the idea of him standing there texting as he is considering suicide didn't resonate with me. Maybe he could ...

    Dec 8, 2014


Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca