jaimemariexo

I really like this poem! I think you did a good job on your punctuation, it makes it a lot easier to understand and makes your poem better, so good ...

This was honestly the first poem I’ve read that made me truly think about my political/personal views in such a way as your's did. I think that you did a ...

I liked the idea if the poem. However I did think that it lacked a bit of explanation and detail, maybe you should elaborate further with some of your lines, ...