jacksonm2002

Very interesting Chinese inventors story. Lots of historical content and I liked that you put the markings over letters (ex: Fēng Mă). I like that there was a cliffhanger,it makes ...

I thought your story was suspenseful and thrilling. Very well written and it would surely scare anyone who reads it of cheating. I liked how you weaved in plenty of ...

I thought that your story was well written and had lots of suspense. The ending was well written and I like that you just didn't something like "and he died ...

Whats up Ayden, I enjoyed your story. I thought it had some good historical content about Buddhism. I like that you incorporated Historical content into the story well (for example ...