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Re: Chapters 5-6
Hello, Lemons. jackdouglassreeves here and I don't have much else to say other than fantastic work with a fantastic final line, and I cannot wait to continue reading! Very well ...
Jun 5, 2016 -
Re: Fear
The final line is absolutely beautiful! Yes, this is definitely poetry, and it is an extremely well-done work. I feel that all constructive criticisms would lean towards the side of ...
Jun 5, 2016 -
Re: Screwed It
This poem was extremely well created, however I find that there is a particular story trying to be told in this poem that I feel the work to rhyme ended ...
Jun 5, 2016
