jDawn

Thanks everybody for the reviews, appreciate them.

: D Hi again! I just have to let you know that my reiew was kinda harsh for my liking, sorry! I guess I was in a bad mood. Sorry ...

Thanks, the critique is good too! =) Why thank you! : ) And no problem. And no worries, he's up in the clouds at Jesus's side. Watching over you! He's ...

The real ending was much like this I just added a struggle to get to shore.

hehe thank you! Yeah, I worked on just that little piece for days, that was part of a huge project that was most of my grade. : ) Thanks, Jessica

Thank you. And yes, I haven't been working extremely hard on this one and I'll try and edit this when I can. Thanks again! - Jessica

I know this is super short, but I just re-did part of the last chapter so the part I re-did wasn't huge anyway. Hope you enjoyed and reviews are appreciated! ...

Loved It! you're a wonderful poet - Jessie

hehe, and that's why they call it a short story! Cool! What book did you get it published in? It's great! - Jessie

Oh, And thank you super much too, Chaos!

Thanks Rosey. It's currently just a draft so feel free to hit me hard. Yes, and they will encounter the police soon and they are also working for an exclusive ...

Thanks guys! Appreciate it! Just a draft now so feel free to hit me as hard as ya got with those reviews. I'll be editing this soon!

Yep. Definitely 10/10. Probably my favorite of the whole series. :smt003 - Jessica

Thank You! Good Luck To You Too! - Jessica

Yeah, that one sentence was wrong and should have been me. : 0 Thanks for the review, I appreciate it much. -Jessica