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Sorry people, I have been rather tied up lately. Thank you for your review, lilymoore. I will try to make the subtle changes you pointed out. Blackbird12, I have to ...

Sorry for the late reply I have been quite tied up lately. Well, I guess that's the thing about literature ( or any type of art for that matter). The ...

Wow, I guess that was just luck then, because I really looked to "making her die" as my only idea of an ending. I didn't know what else to do! ...

Thanks again for your review, Shepherd. I guess you probably understand my style better because you have read my previous one. And I do agree that it would be hard ...

ultraviolet, thank you for taking the time to review. I'm glad you like the bits that you did. I meant it to grab the reader's attention. :) The capitalized letters ...

Shepherd, your review was very honest and true. You are very right in that it was rushed, I did get to a writer's block half way through the story. You ...

max8537, I completely understand your opinion. I didn't clarify some of the things enough (who is speaking, is it still a memory or not, etc.). I will try and improve ...

Hey madhatter58, Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The capitalization is actually intentional. It is inspired by this author, Arundhati Roy who capitalizes words in the middle ...

Evi, thanks a ton for your detailed review. The starting was somewhat intended to be ironic. You're right actually, I shouldn't have mentioned the dog eyes. I guess I just ...

Hey Elinor, Thank you for your review. It was very honest and helpful. I am a true beginner in creative writing and I do admit that it was my first ...

Hey Ten, Thank you for your feedback. Come to think of it, you are right that it is quite unrealistic that the student all agreed. I hadn't taken that into ...

Hey Suzanne, Thanks a lot for your review. The small nit picks you pointed are very true. You have a good eye for details. And with the lemon water, hot ...

Very simplistic, yet speaks a lot I really like how there is not particular structure to it, which makes it more original and not like the typical, superficial layout of ...