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Re: Hate Spelled Out
Very good. Keep on writing. Maybe make your sentences a bit longer. Farewell.
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Sun: Part II
Hi there. This was interesting and great. I hope you write more. Nice punchline and storyline. Keep up the good job.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Why?
The first paragraph, you could try making it clearer yet simple. Good one though. See ya!
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Outcast Chapter One
Nice one.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: A Stolen Life: A Memoir
This will be a good story. Put on more conflict or maybe death to it more tragic..
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: My Deepest Desire
This was great. You should show more rather than to tell. Farewell.
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Game On (Level 0)
I agree that the story is good. You just need to read and write more. Good luck!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: That's What I Thought
This poem is good. I think there is no anything to review.. Keep up!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: nothing
Your story is very interesting. You should split it in few chapters, though. I am a fan of xmen all the time. Great job!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go - Chapter One
nice job! i looking forward for your next writing... keep up the good work!
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Of Toads, Peaches and Teenage Angst: Chapter 3
Hi... i've read your writing... good job!
Aug 13, 2011 -
Re: Mostly Human Chapter 1
your story is great!
Aug 13, 2011