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Hey! Thank you so much for this in depth review. I want to pack the events in this chapter because i thought people would lose interest to read if I ...

Ok. Thank you, guys.

Thank you so much for reading and revieiwing! I'm sorry I should've rated it 18 . Regarding the tenses, if I want to make general statement that is still ongoing, ...

Hello E.E! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes the conversation is happening inside his head, i wish i could've made this clearer to avoid confusion. Thanks for pointing it out. ...

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It's amazing how these few words can sum up a cohesive and meaningful story. I really like this! I do however feel like the story is too linear and simple. ...

Thanks so much for the corrections. I really didn't check for the grammatical errors and all before posting this. As for the flow issue, I wish could've written this better. ...

Thank you for your comment. I will definitely work harder on my next writing.

Thanks for reviewing! I used ugly, idiot and loser repetitively because I thought that's how most haters sound like. Also, i didn't want to say the f-words and all. Glad ...

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Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I really didn't double check anything before I write, hence the mistakes. I'm glad you liked the story. Yes, I am okay ...

Thank you so much for reading and giving such a meaningful insight! I'm glad this story moved you.

Thanks you so much for the feedback!

The dead crow symbolize how terrible the condition at that time. Even the dirty birds like that will die because of pollution... :) ... I'm just telling... :)

Priceless: thanks for the comments is possible if u help me to proof read my story before i post it here . if u wouldn't mind :) LindsayG: Thanks , ...

I got the picture of this poem and it is nor much detailed. It was good. Keep om writing.