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Oh my gosh, I totally missed your reply to this. I'm so sorry. I'll try to formulate some sort of response that makes sense, but no promises. If you want ...

Well you have the italics option. You could also rework this a bit and make an entire flashback chapter with no italics or fancy formatting, and then you could go ...

Thanks for the review! I honestly had forgotten this was even in the GR

No, it's fine

Don't worry too much about it! These are the things you can add in when editing.

Thanks for the review! I'm going to try to keep up my end of the bargain tonight and review your LMS chapter.

you're probably pretty close on for Yuni's description. She's Asian, tall, and slender to just hit the largest descriptors

Congrats! Know that your 450th review is very helpful!

I really did enjoy writing this. You definitely brought up some great points, and they're really going to help when I edit

Yuni and Aiya are sisters. The language they're speaking to Asha in isn't their primary language, and Aiya is especially inexperienced because she hasn't had as much contact with native ...

I should probably mention that Yuni is of a visably different race than the other nobles

Thanks so much for the review! I just want to clear up one thing. A familiar is like a witch's black cat. They help magic users do magic. I kind ...

At a later point, I might need help identifying more of those telly, lumbering moments. Thanks so much for the review!

Originally Aiya's name was Aiko. It's definitely subject to change in later drafts though

We know Aiya is Yuni's sister, so while I don%u2019t explicitly say it, I feel like the reader can easily assume that Aiya is a princess. If I go back ...