inkdragon

Thanks for your response! I agree with most of what you had to say. I'm in the process of un-NaNoWriMo-ing it, so bear with me. ew, ew ew, I hate ...

1. This poem is one long sentence, which isn't cool. 2. It's annoying how every line begins with "you" (except the last one). But other than that, not bad!

Very good! I don't get why you said, "I feel it already" in the first stanza and "I do not feel" in the other two. But other than that, good ...

That's a great series! My favorite AR books are "Stormbreaker", "Scorpia", "Ark Angel", and "Skeleton Key".