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Ah :) Fair enough lol. V :P Inky

Thanks Alainna :) I can see you what you mean about the half a minute thing. :)

I understand it is short. :) I didn't want a long story and this is only one part, not necessarily a chapter. I hope that each part will be inconsistent ...

I can't see anything :S

Also, why don't you go and do some reviews? :) We like a 2:1 ratio for our posts and reviews. It keeps everything balanced. :) Catch you round

Thanks for all the pointers guys :) I'm pretty sure it's moving in the mafia direction but i avoided mentioning that because of the whole cliche side of things. Obviously ...

Flipping creepy :D ahha, well thankyou :)

If by any chance you've seen this poem on here before, it might be because I wrote it a few years ago and I can not remember if I posted ...

Haha i must admit I nearly laughed out loud when you mentioned penguins for the first time :) Is not expected at all. I like that. But there definitely does ...

My first thought was how well this poem flowed lol. Must be how you read it. Love this work :) 8/10