inimitablebeauty

teardrop, i get what your saying and i adding punctuation and capitalization and divided it into stanzas thanks:) -

i like it. my favorite part is when you wrote about how her lessons are tantalizing. what made it so interesting? just curious. -

i agree with Bird on this one i think people are more prone to remembering a poem if it rhymes

i enjoyed how you portrayed the whole year in just 4 paragraphs well done:)

this is great i dont have any critsism about this one

this peice actually reminds me of a poem i did called Vanished As If You Weren't There i really like your work its awesome

i look forward to reading more from you

i really felt your grief in this one. keep writing!:)