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  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: No Title Yet

    To whom the writer of which it may concern: Overall i think that the plot has been slightly pieced together for this one chapter.I do admit i like this more ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Black Dove

    A very heart-wrenching unfold, I should say. The piece was very mending for the reader. I loved this piece! The poetry was profound artistic work. Be careful not to lengthen ...

    Nov 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Bet Chapter 1

    I think this is very well written. The first beginning line hooked me. I however could not point out if this was a girl kissing a girl scene or a ...

    Nov 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Ignis Urbem, Chapter 1

    Ignis Urbem, You probably don't recognize me; I have recently joined this website; I also have pieces of my own i am struggling with but i thought for a starters ...

    Nov 5, 2011


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