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Re: No Title Yet
To whom the writer of which it may concern: Overall i think that the plot has been slightly pieced together for this one chapter.I do admit i like this more ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Black Dove
A very heart-wrenching unfold, I should say. The piece was very mending for the reader. I loved this piece! The poetry was profound artistic work. Be careful not to lengthen ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: The Bet Chapter 1
I think this is very well written. The first beginning line hooked me. I however could not point out if this was a girl kissing a girl scene or a ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: Ignis Urbem, Chapter 1
Ignis Urbem, You probably don't recognize me; I have recently joined this website; I also have pieces of my own i am struggling with but i thought for a starters ...
Nov 5, 2011
