indieeloise

Thank you very much! :)

Thanks for the encouragement!

Thank you so much, that means the world!

I'll put it back up for a day! :)

Thank you so much!

Thanks for reviewing~

Thank you. I struggled with that line as well when I wrote it; I will try to tweak it for more clarity. Thank you so much for reviewing!

Thank you so much for your thoughts. I will definitely refine my character development, and write more in the perspective of what the reader will experience.

You are so right. When I read over this the first few times, I found myself nodding in agreement with everything you said. The character even /felt/ forced when I ...

I had no idea the font was so small - my apologies to your vision! I will definitely work on the info-dumping. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

I had no idea the font was so small - my apologies to your vision! I will consider everything you have suggested; thank you so much for reading and reviewing.

Rod~ -"I do not know what to do in these moments, and I do not know what to say, especially to you, the person to whom I certainly own an ...