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Re: Broken Strings (prologue)
Hmmmm... that was pretty good. Except part of it was kind of like "Wow! I get it!" and then somewhere in there, it was like "What?"... I would suggest reviewing ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Golden eyes, sunset lips
That was pretty powerful. It catches you, because at first, I guess you're speaking about being with that person, or at least feeling and seeing that person, and then it ...
Nov 23, 2010