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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Daily Routine

    It's really short, but you presented it very well. However, most poetry provides a lot of detail and really paints a picture in the reader's head. Yours did this, but ...

    May 6, 2011


“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince