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I don't really think that there's anything wrong with this. It's very cute, very romantic. Keep it up :)

It's very magical. It was like I was there, watching her. I like your use of words to describe the black mass as if it was living.

It was very clear but really sad. It is an emotional piece which brings out the cruel side of love: heartbreak. Keep writing! Georgie x

I love it. it's short, sweet and a little sad

sort of reminds me on myself when I was in love with this guy in my tutor a few months back... hmmm..... its really god though kep it up =]

short, sweet and very well written. I love how Tristan just burst out with a description of her eyes and dimples, I found it quite amusing. Keep up the good ...

i dont really see anything wrong with it i think it's very good and you obviously have a natural talent for it Georgie x

Sionarama First of all, great user name Second of all, thanks for the summary And lastly, it took me about two hours to write this. I'm considering writing what happened ...

Stunning vocabulary. I just loved it. Keep writing Georgie x