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thanks!!!!

hey!! I fixed up chapter one and added a couple things about Chrissy's appearance, which was very difficult without changing a bunch of stuff. So what I have will have ...

Hi!! thanks a lot for this review! I'll work on these things in future writing. Haha I do know how to spell. A lot of the mistakes are because I ...

I wrote the second chapter!!:) If you're interested!!

I wrote the second chapter:) If you're interested!!

Geeky here!!!:) haha I love this! I think everyone can relate to writers block! I know I can! I agree with the last comment though! I think it would be ...

Okay:) thanks!!:)

It looks good!! I hope to hear more poetry from you!!:)

Thanks:) I'll work on those things:)

haha so should I changed the last part and lead into her seeing his scars or is it okay? Ill get those capilization errors fixed!! thank you for reviewing:) I'll ...

I don't think it's that big of a deal... But it might look better if you change it just because the I's are correctly capitalized so it might look better ...

Haha thanks !!!:) Yeah I see the mistakes ! I Probably should have read through it better, and I do play guitar and write music!!! so that's a very good ...

Thank you so much!!:) It's nice to get someone's opinion!! and the heart was an accident. haha:)