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Thanks for all of your input! Sorry, I was kind of late responding. I love the points you brought up. I hope you could read the next chapter. I have ...

Yes. It's a little long but it's hard to find the perfect reading length.

Thanks for your input. I really appreciate your review. It shows that I have a lot to work on but I'm being pointed in the right direction. I have a ...

Thanks for the review! I know my grammar is a little off and I thank you for pointing it out. I will work on it for the next chapter.

I'm glad you liked it. I have to work on those small errors. Thank you for the review!

Please like and I don't mind knit picks. I accept all criticism. Still a positive feedback could make my day also