ichabod

For those of you who missed the cue, the first part takes place well after the second. His condition is he's dead :-P That's why everyone ignores him. The first ...

Heh, I think a few of you missed the boat. Check the dates... particularly the dates of part one, and the date of the accident.

I live in America, lad.

Thanks guys! No rip apart artists? I was kinda looking forward to that.

I always hated cummings, but nice job imitating his style. Only imitating, never duplicating, of course =)

Wonderful piece, no criticism from me. I love how you made hiding one's true self into an art form with all the artistic medium metaphors.

I agree with the one who said the point was kinda lost on making it first person instead of third, that sudden shift was too abrupt. Other than that, I ...